All Comments on 'Futanari Notebook Ch. 20'

Could you, um, release the next chapter, like yesterday please? This is soooo good, can’t wait!

hell...don't hang on such a cliffhanger

I want more...mooooore

I cant wait for the next one

When I read the first chapter, I didn’t realize that it would take a sharp turn away from pure porn. While I was at first annoyed that it was more plot than porn, you’ve made me eager for the next chapter. I’d never thought that in a million years I’d be interested in a porn with plot story, yet you’ve done it, and I applaud you. Well done.

Also I don’t care if Gretchen wasn’t the mastermind behind all of Carmen’s resent suffering, I still want to chuck her off a cliff.

This story arc is somewhat predictable, especially with the foreshadowing, even with the predictability this is by far, one of the best things I've ever read, your writing is on par if not better than most professional authors, keep up the good work. -J

Sexgundam666.

Out of many porn I've read, this one has be hooked like a fish on a bait.

Since I've watched the Death Note Anime years ago, and seeing how this novel is based on it.

I assume that whoever's it is that causing all of this shit to Cerman, is a person who owns a Special Notebook, be it a Futa Note or something else entirely.

Well, regardless, I still want to see that Gretchen bitch suffer

I thought as much last chapter, but now I'm sure, all of the best moments happen off-screen/in the background.. it's like dubstep without the drops, metal with only half of a breakdown, Beethoven's 5th without the crescendo; build ups that lack releases. Anticlimactic.

Who says you can't have plot and porn without sacrificing one for the other..?

Mate i wanted to cum at the end of this story. I ended flaccid and wondering why i'm here. This is not what i (didn't) came for.