by illicitfetish
I expect to see a bunch of those comments complaining about the unrealistic size even though it showed up in the first lines and you can just bail immediately if that's not your thing.
Overall, this is pretty hot, bur feels a bit rushed. A good starting point that you can flesh out more in later chapters and really build the non-sexual stuff up too.
A unique twist. Hope you keep going, and they keep shrinking. This has possibilities.
Just keep at it ignore what everyone else says, this is good shot!