by Gregory8
The only thing is that you kind of misused the transmigration term. This seems more like a simple dimensional shift. Also you could have gone slower and done more world building and character development. The hero is no longer a virgin just two short chapters in and there's barely a psychological factor because he is adjusting to the new reality like a fish to water. There isn't even a physical element since his body is already trained to these activities. But I'm still enjoying the story, basically my only gripe is that you went with an interesting set-up and then underutilized it.
Really good thus far! I like the element that "Avery's" body is already a bit used to this stuff, but I think it would be interesting to focus more on how he mentally is taking these events, and how he's coping with a body that seems much more adept and willing than his mind.
I loved this story so far and think it’s so hot. I’m dying to see where you go from here and what comes next!
This new universe offers quite a lot of interesting possibilities!
This is the first transmigration with a transgender settingthat I have read. It would be nice it you could introduce story elements such as a plot and antagonist if you continue with this.
We need a third chapter to this, hope you continue the story as this is a great start with a very interesting setting.
Chapter 3 please 😂 we are in dire need of more stories like this