by mypenname3000
Okay, I am reading this and a few of your other stories. And I am being slightly critical, but whenever the idea of college or going to school is written, it feels like you are talking about a high school rather than college. Almost how a teenager thinks college classes are going to be structured, but has not experienced it yet. To me it feels like the original story, the characters were early to mid teens, and just aged up to late teens, early 20s. Now I know what type of site this is, but sometimes small details like this can pull people out of the story you are trying to tell.
Other than that the sex scenes are great.