by MaXX1969
You have really thought this slavering thing through. Very detailed. I will be reading more of this story and see where it goes. I like the interaction between the main characters. Thanks for your time and your Imagination.
I like it. Great writing and plot. Thanks and please continue with this story.
Interesting world you created here. I particularly liked the sophisticated restraints you came up with since the idea of permanent bondage is a favorite fantasy of mine. I hope there will be more stories taking place in this setting, maybe fleshing out summer's further experiences?
Thanks a lot for sharing!
This world that you created is very well crafted. All the technical details are well in place.
The human part, the emotions, feelings, reactions could use some improvement and intrigue. I gave it 4 stars.
Please, please finish this story. I am fascinated to know what happens on Thursday February 26th, will Joy Caldwell (the magistrate) become a voluntary sex slave? Then there is the case the detective is working on, does he solve it? Lastly, the villains that tried to enslave summer do they get caught? There's a lot to write about, so please get writing immediately 😉