All Comments on 'G-Pol Ch. 01'

Incredibly impressive and even more so being a first story. You created a very in depth backstory and history of what I figure to be the main players in the upcoming chapters. You did a great job explaining all the technical tools and abilities so that there is little to no confusion. This looks very promising as does your skill and talent as an author/storyteller. Thanks for taking the time and putting in the effort to create and post this intriguing read.

J.D.