All Comments on 'Gabby Takes Control'

Hope its a long HOT Summer !

Please continue the storyline and maybe add in a little cross dressing for Paul.

ive had a few take me like that, my xwife used to pound me with her 8 inch strapon sometimes for over an hour, my god i loved it, made me crazy, eventually i did find out that being fucked with a real cock is even better

always have to be about the guy being submissive and becoming the girlfriends bitch or next step sissy, then she'll have him sucking it and being her sissy cocksucker.

Anal play can actually just be loving you know, just a fun experience for both without the mind games and power play.

Such a great story.

I hope you'll write how they spend the summer, the discoveries they'll make and adventures they'll have.

Thought it started well but when she started with the extra large dildo, lived it but not him and the pain he felt because of it and then all the ‘we will replace regular sex with this’ it went over the top.

These sort of stories are the reason I’d never consider pegging because they all turn into manipulation, abuse and as the other person said - turning them into a sissy or sub.

I can see it would appeal to those inclined towards gay/cross dressing/ sissies and those sad souls who get off on being humiliated but to anyone else I’d expect not

Any chances of their being a sequel possibly with some of those same scenarios Gabby listed off at the end? Really liked the idea of the MC getting fucked in front of a mirror

I would love to see a continution of this story. The best story I have see on this site in a long time. Please continue.

Brilliant. Could do with a second episode.

But ass fucking was too mechanical.

Gave it three stars.

If you ask me, you are the sad soul for being judgmental and for not being open to new experiences.I love it and would be very excited if there were a part 2.

story that quickly descends into abusive humiliation, just great....not.

Loved the story. Wish there was a sequel.

An extremely erotic story, well done.

I thought I might like this story, but... OMFG! MY MIND IS BLOWN! Thank you TheSecretLime, this has got right inside me (if you'll forgive the pun!). Where has Gabby been all my life? I need to find her before I die. It's not just the strap on, it's her thrill of power and the power she exerts in domination. Of fuck, I want to meet at older Gabby, in her prime, who has learnt to use her power for the good of mankind (and me in particular)! Oh thank you, thank you, I think you've literally changed my life :)

Well the story was hot and Gabby was sexy, but then it got abusive with the name calling little bitch, etc. Does pegging always lead to emasculation? I assume that Gabby liked him prior to pegging him. If she turns him into a total bottom, wont the man she was initially attracted to disapper? What next, calling her mistress? Cucolding, feminization? The moral is, at least in this story, if you value your manhood, never consent to pegging.

Great Story.

I would like to read a second part with a little crossdressing.

Maybe Gabby is training to be a beautician and only has Paul to practice during the summer.

And she wants him to look sexy with lingerie and high heels for sex ;)

Almost everything about this was perfect, especially the missionary position deflowering and the pulling the legs up in order to really pour the coals to our hero like one would while in the throes of a full long-dicking fuck. Which this truly was. Didn't much need the degrading remarks but that can be overlooked as the story was soooo good. Thanks for sharing this one.

I mean, fucking her ass would also lead to zero risk of pregnancy and I'm sure they would both cum just as hard...

awesome story. modern fairy tale :)

This is absolutely amazing! Please continue this story <3

Damn this was 🔥

Magnífico!!!!

Continua la historia por favor!!

I am a bit behind the times, I noticed you wrote this three years ago. This was perfect. Sexy, erotic. and very well written. I see you have not written here since 2020, its a shame to deprive your readers of such great writing.

This was as good a story as I have read on here, great stuff. Please get back to writing more.

In step with contemporary attitudes. My only suggestion for you and other writers is to allow the male character to more often not have to be so submissive but co- equally enthusiastic about adding pegging to the couple's sexual dynamics and getting to initiate bottoming. In real life, men often have to persuade the female partner to swap roles.

Good premise.

Sex too rushed.

Needed more teasing/foreplay/preliminaries.

Three stars.