All Comments on 'Gaining Confidence Ch. 02'

"My dick is hard as a diamond and she can fill it." I imagine the verb should be "feel" not "fill."

I like the series. Will he get Erin? Will she accept him? Or will he forget her as he gains confidence in his abilities?

Your writing is almost there. A little more care to detail would help. I gave you four stars, which is very high for me.

really like where this is heading, but would you, or can you continue?