by eeric
The ‘worshipping’ black cock is taken to far at times….
Excellent storyline, wish I were there. Great writing. xoxoxoAnnette
I loved the story. No big deal on the little edits, it's the story that counts and it's great. Hope to see more chapters. Thanks!!
It is great to see you posting stories, but your Back to the South and An Eye Opener series are much better (better theme as well). Stick with Back to the South and finish that series up.
The idea of a black mans club where ravishing white women are totally submissive to powerful black men has been used several times. Good character development but seriously in need of an edit. There were often words missing from a sentence. Learn the difference between "passed" and "past". I gave it a 4* but only because there is no 3.5.