All Comments on 'Gallus Nigrum Ch. 02'

by eeric

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stephanois62stephanois62about 1 year ago

une suite surtout avec l avocate asiatique et sa famille

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love this this series!

I want to see MORE stories in this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please do

Love this series and want to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
A little over the top

The ‘worshipping’ black cock is taken to far at times….

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopalmost 8 years ago
Love it, great hot story

Excellent storyline, wish I were there. Great writing. xoxoxoAnnette

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348almost 8 years ago
Great start

I loved the story. No big deal on the little edits, it's the story that counts and it's great. Hope to see more chapters. Thanks!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Stay with your other series...

It is great to see you posting stories, but your Back to the South and An Eye Opener series are much better (better theme as well). Stick with Back to the South and finish that series up.

AnthonyT60185AnthonyT60185almost 8 years ago
Interesting premise.

The idea of a black mans club where ravishing white women are totally submissive to powerful black men has been used several times. Good character development but seriously in need of an edit. There were often words missing from a sentence. Learn the difference between "passed" and "past". I gave it a 4* but only because there is no 3.5.

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