All Comments on 'Gambled and Lost'

This was great! You should make it a series. I'd love to see what these two get up

This was so hot! Pls make a series 🙏

I have no preference as fair as 1st or 3rd person. This is excellent and I would love to see more.

Ur writing is so goood

1st I guess

I have nothing to constructive to say it’s just so pleasing to get off reading about bodies like mine. Thank you

Oh damn this was so absolutely hot PLEASE write a part 2 for when Andrew comes back, I am begging you.

I usually see noncon where the cis man is taking advantage of the transmasc, which I'm bored of at this point. Desensitized to it. I love how this flips that dynamic and STICKS to it with no ambiguity, I love the magic elements (you motivate me to keep writing my own ideas!), and I did enjoy seeing how you portrayed the victim's POV. What I would have liked, if you followed up the story with another part, is maybe Ezra's point of view. We rarely get the perp's point of view, who is usually the most active participant in something like this, but it's also interesting to me because I want to know more about what compels him to basically sexually enslave this guy. That, and the whole "but I don't like dudes!" orientation play in Andrew's inner monologue made me chuckle more than it gave me a tiny-boner. Too real, too done. All in all, wonderful story, 5 stars-- not actually perfect in my mind (can anything be?), but still novel to this genre, a lovely and concise tale, and I enjoyed it. (FYI, I write this review before checking your page, so if you have a second part already, I will read and comment on that next.)

Incredible incredible incredible. The teasing before he rode Andrew was so delicious, and I loved how the trans guy topped! It’s awesome seeing realistic trans men in erotica. Thank you!

I know this was written a bit ago but it is still reaching née fans <3

Excellent. Amazing to see a Trans male Top.

Ohhhh my gosh I was just about giving up on ftm stuff that was kinky but the trans aspect wasn’t the kink, it was just there but also somewhat addressed… why is this so perfect.

For this story I liked the close third a lot. Made it feel like a fairy tale which is fitting with the aesthetic

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this is exactly the kind of thing I’ve been looking for ooomg… we need more ftm tops!! having a cute knight at your mercy sounds so good eheheh….

sooooooo hot thanks for writing. also ezra seems so cool i just wanna learn some spells from him

AMAZINGGGG 100/10