All Comments on 'Game and Match: Jenny's 4 on 1'

i hope ther is a part two.

Damn good tale.

Keep going writing and keep us happies please!

Glad you'd let us read it. Right balance of action and description of people.

This story was pretty hot, blushingjen. Kept me reading all the way through, and then back again over the good bits.

A great first story. Listen to your readers - and your heart - and keep writing.

And very hot. I loved Jenny's transformation from good girl to slut. Keep writing!

A sweet innocent looking little girl who will do anything for a man.How could you not love her. Thanks....Rich

great discription. Really enjoyed the progression in the hot tub. The varity of positions kept the story flowing nicely

Great first effort from someone who promises to be a Lit favorite. You have great descriptive skills and a wonderful talent for making us love the character. My only objection was that the end seemed a little rushed. Can't wait to read your next submission.

Jenny's my kind of girl - sweet natured and a lot of fun!

Looking forward to reading more!

Believable story, characters I like, and steamy sex. I hope you keep writing!

Slut loving is fun!

Hot writing, hot subject - I hope we'll see a lot more from you, whether about Jenny or not. Well done!

Yep! Well written, and very sexy. A definite pleasure to read. ;-)

So hot. I loved this story

Very nice and really hot.

I'd love to do what Jenny did. Oh, so fun. . .