All Comments on 'Game Day Guacamole'

1 star for wrong category.

Nice fun story. Keep up the good work.

Same shit different day....

Applies to you and NOT the author I am afraid.

Is LW always this full of trolls?

Almost a little disappointing that the two couples didn't go much further, but still an interesting "first soft-swing" finish.

And yes, the troll named Anonymous has checked in as usual. For some reason he hasn't called the author a "wimp" yet....must be feeling mellow today - probably didn't jerk off to your story..

That said, it was a good story... sexy and well written

Love the story, got me nice and wound up. My wife was quite pleased with the pounding she got after I read your story! :-)

It would have been quite the tease to watch football next to a naked woman even if they didn't have any mind altering drug in the food.

I did enjoy that they went to their own spouses to fulfill their need to fuck. It made the story a lot better for me that they didn't fuck their friends.

As a football fan, I applaud the story. There is nothing like watching football naked with a lady who loves football. This is a fun story, well thought out and well written. And high scoring games are always more fun to watch.

The football concept is cute and novel. Light on sex, but light-hearted also.

aahhh- them dirty rap videos, good plot, and great language. The play by play quarter by quarter really added realism.

However, it had enough good so I gave it 3***.

As indicated by this asinine story , this is very appropriate pen name.

"quivering like a Parkinson's patient" got you a "1" very poor taste

This really is sick -- so why did I like it? So why did I give it a 5 with one hand while the other was in my panties?

This was a strange story that could have gone in many different directions so there is always a chance for a part two. In case anyone is thinking about finding using Spanish Fly (yes it does exist), please don't. There are several side effects that can be serious and possible cause death.

This story definitely needs to be continued in bisexual swing!