All Comments on 'Game Night'

An excellent story spoiled by idiotic errors. "Messaging" instead of "massaging" and shit like "Instead of answEricg".

Read your stories before posting them or, even better, get an editor.

While it could use some editing, as anonymous pointed out, the actual storytelling was great. I hope you continue writing as I'd love to read more like this.

Only problem is like Anon said "offEricg"

I take it you originally named Eric - Erin and did a /Find and Replace/... always do it in manual mode if you are not going to re-read it afterward...

Otherwise it was hot...

& the heat turned up....and up. I learned to get into the amazing development and looked past the errors. Do write more. I love loving 3 somes....etc!

Keep writing. Yes, there are mistakes, but you have good use of language, and most important of all, a lovely filthy mind and the ability to express it well. Let's see some more of your work.

Oh, this one was the best of the lot. Three consenting adults attracted to each other, taking time to explore. No cheating, cuckolding, going behind the back, trying to manipulate or control another, prioritize one over another, forcing or manipulating to withhold. Far better than your other two stories in the group sex category.

I believe that most of the typos and misspellings are fixed. Thank you for pointing them out! Also, thank you for your encouragement, I will try to keep writing and, hopefully, pleasing!

Nope, u missed a few grammar errors and misspellings, but I enjoyed the story enough that I just kept reading.

Loved the story

Best Truth or Dare story ever.

The only error worthwhile fixing I noticed was "message" vs. "massage."

Best 2 on 1 pussy licking scenes I ever read. Hotter than hell!

Glad I. Not the only one bothered by wrong word usage. I had to stop 🛑 & look it up to make sure I was right.

A very hot & satisfying tale. Enjoyed it 5 stars worth.

Bill S.