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He looked over the Draenei, just coming to her senses, then down to the clipboard. His mind was wonderfully focused on his single purpose, and right now it was to note down. He began to scribble down a few things:
"Single encounter, not for enslavement. Nareena, two-thousand and fifty-five, Draenei female. Blue skin with fair hair," he said, aloud to himself, giving the dazed woman a single glance.
He then turned on his heels, walking towards the cloth wall, before drawing back the curtain. He gave the throne a fond glance, before ringing the bell.
This is a very hot story--great build-up, and I'm glad you included an element of choice near the end (it's the manipulation of characters into bad but voluntary choices, especially incremental, slippery-slope choices, that I find hottest in these kinds of stories).
I do hope you'll keep writing! And I hope you'll expand around this scene a bit; I'd love to read more about the characters you've introduced.
Great first story to Literotica! I really enjoyed it! Hope to see more of your literary skills in the future!
Hey! Thanks for the welcome, it means a lot to me. And I actually imagine Alaron to be a former dock worker. It is less noticeable, than if a hero of sorts go missing, after all.
Also, dem muscles.
Nice first submission and welcome to literotica.
Makes me wonder what was his class, though if it was in his name, I apologize, its been far too long since I lived there.