All Comments on 'Gamer Girl'

Good outline level. Fill your story in more, size of cocks and a little pain here and there. Make her really feel the cocks as they open up her tight holes.

The gagging, ring gag the mouth fucking and deep throating really makes me wet and turned on it just makes me cum so hard and while i cum i am imagining that it's me being deep throated and being gang banged and used like that. Thank you for writing this i really loved it

You’ve the basis of a great little tale I just wanted more detail around everything that was going on

This has the potential to be three to four times as long you are a competent writer so see this please as constructive feedback aimed at encouraging you

I love the fact you got right to the points. My pussy was wet immediately and I came so fast, imagining that was me tied and gagged.