All Comments on 'Games Ch. 02'

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WoodButcher57WoodButcher57almost 16 years ago
Should

have dropped George, should have not been in that room either, but, still should have dropped George as a reminder that he over stepped the ground rules.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Liked it

Would agree, ole george would have to pay somehow. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Glad

you gave them something with which to HEAL!!! And though I'm not ordinarily vindictive, I agree that George did stretch the rules and needed to be reminded in some "painful" way that there was someone around to "judge" his actions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Piiful as usual

You older authors are entirely too forgiving. I guess once you can't get an erection; you also lose your balls.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969almost 16 years ago
Not sure about this one!

Not bad recovery from the first chapter and okay at least they worked through the problem. But as other have said Gorge broke the rules he should have been told not to do it again in no uncertain times and in a painful way. The only other thing I would say is it's a dangerous game when you have to have your wife flash the next door neighbour to get aroused.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Thing wouldn't be fine with me until I got to fuck Georges wife with him and my used goods wife tied up and watching as I shot my sperm into her body. Just giving in like that makes him a spineless wimp cuckhold

norcal62norcal62almost 12 years ago
So much for a passive, dishonest, and timid male character.

Also, why repeat most of the first chapter in the second chapter of each story?

The supposed fun of the games in this story was ruined by the male insecurity and almost total lack of honesty. Was that the intent? Too many of the good characteristics of the marriage described by hubby were summarily canceled out by his following actions; or inaction. Didn't make sense.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Yepper

A lot of be careful what you wish for suddenly people fail to think things through when the decide to try something different then wonder how they let themselves get carried away and hurt each other -

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ALWAYS THE WOMAN GETS

fucked and thinks it is OK...just shows how quickly a silly game can get out of hand...George was intent on screwing someone.....if you play with fire you will get burnt....

BetterEndingBetterEndingalmost 10 years ago
A Recovery, Somewhat

This was somewhat of a recovery from chapter 1 in that he admitted that it was not him at the party. There are still some unanswered questions though.

Why did she allow anyone to have her when she could not be positive it was her husband? Why was she not angry about being taken advantage of when she found out it was not her husband? She originally described the party as being full of adult games, strip poker, etc. Why did they only play the dark room game? Other than that, it was just a normal party.

This all seems like a setup. During the game, the one time Dan thought he had found Sharon, he was pulled away from her. Then, when finally confronted she says "Nothing was planned, you know. It was just supposed to be fun, feeling each other in the dark." If that was true, then why did she allow the sex? Methinks she dost protest too much. I think Dan let Sharon get away with one.

George needs to have his ass kicked. Not to keep him from doing it again but because he did it that time.

All in all, there are too many unanswered questions and not enough follow through by Dan for me to enjoy this story.

krosis666krosis666almost 10 years ago
Agree with BetterEnding

He raised some very valid points. It definitely seemed like a set up. If Magmaman's stories have taught us anything, it's that you should NEVER marry or even date a woman named Sharon. A high proportion of his stories have a cheating spouse named Sharon. Coincidence, or experience?

krosis666krosis666almost 10 years ago
The more I think about it

The more it seems like it really was a set up. Think about it. Ten years of marriage, and she can't recognize her own husband? His touch, his smell, the sound of his breathing for fuck sake, should all be as familiar as her own reflection in the mirror! Hell, we can all tell which of our coworkers is behind us without ever looking, just by the sound of their footsteps, by their mere presence. And we only work with these people. The person that you sleep with, wake up with, spend nearly all of your time with, should be far more familiar. And she claims she didn't even know the cock pushing into her wasn't her husbands? Even the manner in which it was pushed against her would let her know! Hell, even identical twins can be told apart by mere acquaintances, and she couldn't tell it wasn't her husband? Yeah right.

BTW, which of them suggested going to the party? Which of them convinced and pleaded with the other to go? Which of them lied about what would happen there? Which of them let someone fuck them, even though (at least she claims) she 'didn't know who it was'? She had sex, in a darkened room, filled with naked strangers, even though she didn't know who with? And didn't protest in the slightest. Was she wearing sound proof headphones? Were there no sounds in the room? You can ALWAYS tell, and so could she. She knew exactly who she was with, and not once said no, because that was the whole reason she asked to be invited in the first place. Just another cheating slut, with a clueless husband.

krosis666krosis666almost 10 years ago
Finally (bear with me, I comment as I think of it)

Why did she beg hubby not to go have it out with George? If her story is true, then George fucked her without consent, making it rape. Yet she, more than once, begged hubby not to talk to George. Why? Was she afraid if he threatened to beat up George, that George would tell him how it was all pre-arranged, how it was a set up of her making?

Never involve others in a relationship, because one or the other will always want that bit extra, always want the forbidden.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Liked it.

My night vision goggles work great when playing this game.

tom anon

fisheronefisheronealmost 7 years ago
Marriage strain

This is a perfect example of the problems that can occur with bringing other people in your intimate time. It was portrayed as fondling but George knew who it was because of her height and bald beaver. George should have been called out on it by Sharon when it occurred. She wouldn't have been full of another mans seed and caused husband's ed. I am glad they overcame but it caused damage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
@Fisherone

Very good observations. Adding another/others to the marital situation is extremely risky. When I read part one about them going along with the Dark Room adventure I immediately thought they (as a couple) should have discussed any limitations orrules before they got there. And they should have paused and had a frank discussion with the other couples about rules, expectations and limits - after all they just met these people. AND too much alcohol at an adult party can cloud the minds of othewise sensible people.

Yes that is my voice of experience. At a New Years Eve party many years back we suspected there would be some physical game playing. We had a serious, sober discussion days before the party. Hands anywhere were okay. Oral or vaginal penetration with a dick were not permitted. Ass play was totally out. So we ended up sleeping there with the other 2 couples. A bit trashed, sexually sated by hands and fingering only. Maybe I should try my hand at writing about our fee adventures. We're in our late 60's now, married 46 years. Its been pretty good.

SoaringCloudsSoaringCloudsabout 4 years ago
Misdirection

Everyone keeps blaming George, because Sharon said it was George. But if she really was setting this up for some strange, why would she fuck someone who's "almost exactly like her husband?" If it was a setup, then there would be no reason for her to think the guy was her husband. George was a shield, and she kept her husband away from George because he was an innocent party. It was the other dude.

SarahwithloveSarahwithlove9 months ago

Loved it. 5 stars

Right now, it doesn't look like a setup with the information we have. That was George, seeking her out in the dark. She was his target. She let it go too far and used the excuse that she thought it was her husband. As a woman, we know what our husbands feel like in the dark. We know their smells, their body hair, their hands, their sexual sounds, and a dozen other little nuances that darkness can;t hide. So she let it happen knowing it was another person. That is a problem.

The other problem is that Sarah works with Sharon and therefore George may have met Sharon after work if he picked his wife up after her shift. He may have been instrumental in getting his wife to invite the new couple. Dan needs to see if George has a similar size cock, I bet he doesn't. If it is bigger, Sharon is busted and George needs to watch his back. I hope it doesn't get convoluted like that leading to a divorce. These conniving, scheming women are wearing on me lately, so hopefully ti is a non issue. In other words, no Chapter 3 please.

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