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Click hereI didn't reply. She flinched.
"It wasn't ... it didn't mean anything ..." said Diane.
- "It did to me." I said. Then I left.
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- COMMENTS
SouthernCrossfireover 1 year agoDamn. I liked Diane and hoped that Ian might eventually end up with her (D-Ian-e, they just go together, right?), so what she did seemed really out of character. Maybe I just missed something but her "It didn't mean anything" shows how little she knows about Ian and about relationships. Adios, chica. I hope he doesn't pine over her.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoDid NOT see that coming. Figured something would happen between them, but NOT that.
GeoD
MelanPoncaover 6 years agoMaybe I've gotten hip to you gut punching us when we think it's going well for Ian, but I was waiting for the shoe to drop for the entire chapter. I also have suspicions that it's Coop who's banging her, but in the larger scheme (Ian's story) it doesn't make much difference.
Simran, now that's a hook-up that is gonna come along sooner or later, and maybe it'll FINALLY work out for them...maybe. If it doesn't last I sure hope they can part on good terms. If not, THAT breakup could really fuck up his life/friendships/D&D gaming night.
Great stuff you've written here. I'm invested in your story AND I am following you so I know when you've put out some new (AKA great) stuff. Looking forward to reading more about these characters.
Keep up the great work!
Mel
Anonymousover 6 years agoJust did a full read of your story and couldn't stop even though i got work in morning and it's 2am. Your way of writing is great and hope you keep it up :)
gemman1over 6 years agoHad that happen to me in my original D&D group back in the 70's.. damn son did we know each other then?...lol...You are a great writer, keep it up.
fafhrd09over 6 years agoBeen there. Hated it (by which I mean being cheated upon).
The ongoing saga is unfolding quite nicely!
AspernEsslingover 6 years agoAuthorThank you for the comments - and the compliments (even the backhanded ones). Just so you know, Part 9 is already submitted, Part 10 is being edited, and I have started Part 11. What I mean is ... the story didn't change because of the comments. But I do love all of your theories and guesses.
loragassover 6 years agoBrings back very fond memories, from many years ago. The other brings back very sad memories also from many years ago. The story is very good, to bring up those memories to begin with. Please carry on.
