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fastandsloppyover 14 years agoGood writing but your portions are too small
You would be better off posting this story a one longer story or as a multi part story divided into fewer chapters. As I said on part one, I like your writing style but you are cutting out before I can really build up my interest.
Anonymousover 9 years agoToo short and unsatisfying.
Your texts should be four times as long, at least. They end before any real interest is generated. Standard of writing pretty poor, too.
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