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by fastandsloppy

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thick9thick9over 14 years ago
A Great Tale

Fan-fucking-tastic!!

t_dmannst_dmannsover 14 years ago
Nice

Your imagination is out there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
poorly-written

Mechanical and completely unarousing. Grow up!

Friskee_cplFriskee_cplover 14 years ago
Genius

Bloody great mate. As always your writing is brilliant and you are gathering all the comments from the pin-dick rednecks.

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
My white wife & daughters fuck black men

Great story. My white wife was the oldest of 5 children to a single mom. My wife's mom loved sex and fucked as often as she could, including black men. My future wife started fucking black men at 15. She loves fucking black men. When we met we lived together for a year. I was in the military and I shared her pussy with my friends. After being together for a tear we got married. I continued sharing her pussy with my friends. While with me she never fucked black men. I had asked her several times if she had ever fucked a black man and she always said no. After being married for a year while we were fucking I asked her if she had ever fucked a black man. She hesitated and finally said yes. I got really turned on thinking that my wife fucked black men. I asked her to tell me about the black men she had fucked. As she told me I got really turned on. She told me about her mom fucking black men. That weekend we went to a bar near the Navy base and picked up a black sailor for her to fuck. I watched as she fucked the black sailor. After the black sailor fucked her several times I took him back to the bar. When I returned she was waiting for me. I ate her pussy as she told me about fucking the black sailor. I then fucked her. We had great sex. After the first black fuck we discussed her future fucking. We both decided that she would only fuck black men in the future. Soon we were going to bars around the Navy base and picking up black sailors. Sometimes we would pick up 2 or 3 sailors for her to fuck. Our sex life was fantastic. My wife had my permission to fuck as many black men as she could. There were times when she would be out shopping during the day and she would be approached by black men. She always fucked them. She would take them to our home to fuck. When I returned after work she would be in bed waiting with a pussy full of black cum. I knew she had fucked. I would undress and start eating her pussy while she told me about her day of fucking black men. I would then fuck her. We both loved it. Years later we had 4 daughters. Three of them learned to fuck black men. Our oldest daughter would invite her mom to fuck black men together. They would go on dates with black men to fuck. I would wait at home with a hardon until my wife returned, freshly black fucked.

Our black sex life is great. I have learned to suck black cocks and love it. Walt

fastandsloppyfastandsloppyover 14 years agoAuthor
Holy Shit

Holy shit anonymous, just write it as a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You Want

A mentally ill man to write a story, don't you think we have enough sick authers now. I have always been a heathen, but stories like yours and the idiots comments about his wife and daughters have me hoping there is a God, cause we need one. Fucking sick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Anony in USA comes out of the closet as

a wimp cuck, very good. Now read a few stories that involve men and find out what you can do to clean up the gene pool so this type of insanity doesnt occur in the future. To be kind, sterilization of all of them may be one possible answer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Where Is The Credit

for the gals. The story should have ended with, "and there wasn't a drop of sperm left in even one of those cocks."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
what the fuck

i know that these are meant to be about incest/taboo but that is just fucking sick.

TUCSON REDTUCSON REDabout 14 years ago
COULD USE MORE DETAIL

THE IDEA OF A MOM AND DAUGHTER IS GOOD. YOU SHOULD GO INTO MORE DETAIL ON HOW IT FELT TO SEE EACH OTHER BEING HAD.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well...

I certainly enjoyed it...thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Critics

You can't live without them, but, you certainly can live without them. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Holy shit!

That certainly gave my clit a workout.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
decent story

i thought your story was pretty decent. I don't get all of these whack comments on here about your story. This is a literotica story about incest, if it is too much then go to the Sesame Street page. Go see what Hannah Montanna is talking about. Meanwhile, allow this writer to write and keep the negative comments unless they can at least in someway be constructive to the betterment of a talent. The story had plot, good imagination and it fit the topic which is incest pretty good. I give it a B

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great story

This was a great story. I understand it was hard to go in to details with so much going around I don't get why some of these people are giving it negative comments. What do they expect from a story in the incest section? I got a feeling those people are just trolls with nothing better to do.

LittleprickLittleprickabout 13 years ago
loved it

great story. The mother/daughter gangbang was a great idea and you wrote it so well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Great story, ignore the trolls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent story

Excellent story. You should write a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Loved your story. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
disgusting

Disgusting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Loved it

What a original idea. I loved it. Wish my own lovely wife and daughter could experience a gang bang together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Quite well written.

You don't have to be a fan of the topic of the story (I don't know why you'd be reading it if you weren't, though) in order to appreciate the skill in writing this. Goes far above and beyond the standard "he puts his dick inside her" norm on Literotica, which I quite enjoyed. Would have liked more detail on their prior relationship, and at some times both of the main characters seemed very, very unbelievable, but the descriptions made up for it in my opinion. 4/5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
daughter and step mom black gangbang

My 28 yr old daughter asked me if me and my x were swingers and I told her we were open and that she had gotten gangbanged when she was 16 yrs old and she loved it and also loved dressing like a slut and flashing. I told my daughter that on her 21st birthday (her 20 me 40) I wanted to find 21 big fat black cocks to gangbang her and she wanted to see how big of a gangbang she could do and she also liked women. I told my daughter I had found some naked pictures of her and her boyfriend and she had nice tits. I told her I jerked off to them and she giggled. She said she loved big black cocks also and also liked women and if I could get my x to do a big black cock gangbang with her. They could put a show on then get gangbanged at some batchlor parties and other parties. I told her I would find her another slut step mom so they could become big black cock whores and we could do as many gangbangs as possible. She told me that I couldnt find a cock big enough for her or enough. Shes been locked up for 1 yr and is fixing to get out. Ive got 20 big black cocks waiting for her. Im talking as big around as a beer can and 12 inches long. I cant wait to see my little slut get ass fucked by these big cocks. Im still looking for more. I told her I was going to make her the biggest and best big black cock whore around. She said shes ready to earn that title and to bring all the big black cock I can find because she will never get enough. What a slut now I need a wife to match that

RHinSCRHinSCover 12 years ago
Re: Last Comment

You must be very proud, it sounds like it. If I read correctly, your daughter is a convict and a whore. Doesn't say much for the parents does it? You gonna' get her a grand worth of dope too?

fastandsloppyfastandsloppyover 12 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous (The one with the long daughter-black-gangbang annecdote)

I don't believe any of that for a second. However, the story has potential. You should take a creative writing class at a local community college and try writing that up in something approaching English prose. Seriously.

I the mean time, your twisted fantasy makes me thing you'd like another story of mine. It's called "Witness To My Daugther's Debasement". It doesn't have the interracial component you seem to dig, but other than that it seems like it's just your type of story.

TTFN & thanks for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fabulous

I loved the story. My I am sick but I also thought about a gay son getting into a gang bang from rich men and his father chaperoning and getting turned from straight to gay and sharing with his son like the mother daughter. Thank you so much. It really turned me on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Can't Decide

I can't decide whether this story is just plain sick, or really, really arousing. So, I looked down at my cock, and sure enough, it was erect. Once again, I've let my cock be the decider. And people wonder why I get in so much trouble!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
my cunt

OMG my cunt is on fire, the story was amazing. don't listen to the negative people. If they think its sick they shouldn't be looking at incest taboo stories. I am off to see what other dirty stories you might have:) my clit is sooo swollen and needs to be played with:) awesome story. would love to be one of the sluts in your story:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Ignore the trolls

Hot story - nasty premise, got me rigid, and the imagination in overdrive! And yes, there are some mom/daughter teams out there. If only they were all as wild as our imaginations. Thanks for the effort, look forward to more.

txnmiketxnmikealmost 11 years ago
Wow

Holy Shit that was hot.

Great writing too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
brilliant!

Years ago my friend and I got gangbanged by 12 guys in a nightclub, mostly bareback, your story brought back the memories - thanks!

pixandwordspixandwordsover 10 years ago
Excellent

Very erotic descriptive prose. A certain 'five star' story.

parker3522parker3522over 10 years ago
Hot, amazing, Erotic.

Well written. Very hot and sensual. I'm a little uncomfortable about the incest, however that discomfort is vastly offset by the sexual descriptions that kept me hard and leaking precum through out. Primal sex. Men with out limitations, women responding to their bodies as the men use them in so many different ways. Well done!

YKN4949YKN4949about 10 years ago
Good story

What I liked most was the author took a premise that was completely implausible, but because it maintained an inner logic and had somewhat believeable motivations, it really worked. Great descriptions too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hot

http://xhamster.com/movies/1347787/two_nasty_cuckold_wives_in_bukkake_party.html

sandymonroesandymonroeover 9 years ago

It was a bit sick but totally hot! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
You're kidding me

Can't get past the concept of cum guzzling ass fucking cum dumpster mom /daughter whores . yet mom bust's her balls about language . really . lol

jon.hayworthjon.hayworthover 8 years ago
Great ending

So often our sex stories have no real ending.

"I laughed. "OK baby. Help mama up. Let's go find that dildo.""

Really gave this story a humerous closure

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Where are they?

If only I could find a mother and daughter like these two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Crap!

What a crock of shit.

The old fart

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Too wordy!

Put some effort into making your stories hot and less wordy.

SanibelBelleSanibelBelleover 6 years ago
What an absolute turn on for me! Thanks!

I must say that for this story, your writing style matches your name! I loved it! Damn, who wants finesse from a sex stories site! Fuck the people that gave such silly negative comments. I would suppose that they read the stories and secretly would have fucked and unloaded their cocks all over and "in" this mother and daughter without any problem! I would have loved to attend and participate! Thanks again!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Just enough back story....

Let's everyone know from the start that mom is a natural slut and it runs in the genes. It sets the rest of the story up to the all hole mommy daughter cream pie swap that the reader is wanting.... While many sub plots were not exploited enough in my opinion it is a very good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I really can't understand why those people think that incest is so sick, I have a sister too but I am absolutely not aroused by her and my mother isn't hot and I think it would be disgusting having sex with both of them, but it doesn't affect me enjoying this story, after all, it's all fantasy right? I loved the way you described the mother succumbing to temptation of the gangbang, it was so hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Descriptive!

This story has the best creampie scene I have read to date, when mom is on her back with daughter hovering over her, and watches a big cock slide in and out until it stops and, voila! ...that's an incredibly vivid description. Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you profusely.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read, on or off Literotica. I realize that this includes work by Poe, Hemingway, and other greats. I nominate fastandsloppy to join this great assemblage.

trixie47cdtrixie47cdover 4 years ago
Disturbingly beautiful

Thanks. This one really made me wish I could read faster.

steverob1054steverob1054about 4 years ago

Proof reading would have helped - is she Jamie or Janie as you managed to use both in the first paragraph??

davebccanadadavebccanadaalmost 4 years ago
Discusting

Disgustingly excellent, of course. And that's what fantasy is all about so I enjoyed it and thanks for sharing. I plan to read the other two about this couple right now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Daughter, daughter

Would have liked it more if the focus was on daughter first, the thrill was all about an understanding mother taking her daughter to a Gangbangthe mother didn't need to join she couldve seen how her young daughter was used by multiple older men. Hats off to the massive black cock man, BLM!

FinickyPanickyFinickyPanickyabout 3 years ago

Personally, it would've been better if Janie went solo for the gangbang first. Then through calling in a timeout or sensually inviting her mother to join the party would've it been better to showcase how the daughter turned out to be like her mother.

FinickyPanickyFinickyPanickyabout 3 years ago

Personally, it would've been better if Janie went solo for the gangbang first. Then through calling in a timeout or sensually inviting her mother to join the party would've it been better to showcase how the daughter turned out to be like her mother.

AnnatartywifeAnnatartywifealmost 3 years ago

Really nice fantasy scene, very well written and full of amazingly descriptive words and sentences..clever you!

Really enjoyed it. 5 stars from me and into my faves!

VivianBelle2021VivianBelle2021over 2 years ago

This has legit been one of my favourite stories ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It was good. But I wish you would have let the mother & daughter got breeded.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Fantastic, have read this story many times and will many times more!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hope mother daughter end getting knocked up I fucked my girl friend and her mother sametime I knocked both of them up sametime then had friends come over gangbanged them hardcore style time we finished both were really sore mother told me you your friends ripped me apart my asshole and cunt pushed her down on her tummy rammed her asshole real hard she screamed yelled at me fucking bastard you ripped my rectum more that let you know you and your daughter now belong to me and my friends

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Was fun for me. Would have liked just a bit of reluctance on mom's part before joining in, perhaps waiting until Janie had be DPed or perhaps made airtight. In fact, mom could have helped stretch Janie's ass before her first anal encounter. In any case, lots of fun, good description.

Glad to hear there is a sequel. Now if the author would only write a sequel to "Blowjob Contest: Mother vs Daughter". . .

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