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All Comments on 'Gas Light on and No Money'

by Desiremore4u

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cowbullscowbullsover 7 years ago

One of the best stories I have read on this site in a while. This begs for a chapter 2 so the two boys could take a turn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nah!

poorly done. had some potential.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good Story, But

Quotation marks around the dialogue would make this a lot more readable.

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