All Comments on 'Gate-Way Girl'

Very well written, easy to follow, and the progression had a natural flow to it. The only thing lacking was character development, but I feel you did more than enough with the length of story you were working with.

Looking forward to more than just one installment.

Keep it coming!!!

please continue this story, i can't wait to see what happens next

want more please contiune

I love it!

Great story and looking forward to next chapter. What surprise will come with the daughter?

That's not fair, no way to end a story!

Earned four stars for the story but got three because of the ending, got the fish nibbling the bait now you sank the hook and reeling us in.

You could make a series out of this!!!!!

Nice story slightly spoilt by the spanking, but can't wait for Sara to get hers.

All naughty girls should lose their virginity this way. Keep it up. More please.

HOT!!! Made my pussy ache just reading it. Hope to see another chapter where he fucks his own daughter.

So naughty 😈 I can't wait for the next chapter, this is how daddies should behave.

I can't wait for the next part where u fuck u daughter to & her firend watches.

Clearly by now you've seen sufficient interested expressed in continuing the saga, and you do have track record of serial chapters, so let 'er rip

Well, figuratively, not literally

I loved the story so far. Needs to take his daughter now. I think you need to finish this awesome story.

I want my daddys hard cock in me.! I wish someone would lick my tight swollen pussy now.! This story is too hot.! I wish I had a daddy to fuck me like this. ;) spank my pussy pease.!!!

He needs to fuck his daughter, but only after giving her another spanking which leaves her ass all red and hot and bothered.

More please. Interesting story and style.

Straight to the point, can't wait to read more in this storyline! Thanks

Can't wait to read the next chapter. xx

This story made me so hot and horny. My pussy is soaked!! PLEASE Continue it!!

Too short but sweet :)

I want more too!

Does "Please" help?

Waiting for chapter 2!

He needs and she needs him to fuck her@!!

Very very HOT and arousing. Great start and Yes we need at least chapter 2 and maybe more if it's anything like the first chapter. Well written and brought the unexpected twist of action with Ashley and next hopefully; his daughter Sara. Hopefully,m Sara will be just as wet and horny as Ashley and quickly wants to screw her Dad really hard. Since both girls seem to share everything; maybe they will after thinking over this experience set up a plan to both screw him at the same time ??? Many possibilities Daddy. Thank you.

So when are you going to finish this wonderful story that you started and then left us hanging???????????????

You say the story would continue if feedback supports the need. I see that this is rated 4.50, has several likes, and 26 comments. Now, I didn't read the comments, so, I cannot say how positive they were. But I would like to know what you consider enough feedback to support another installment.

Frankly, I could imagine that the second installment be all about the father struggling with his desires, even being a little hesitant to continue with Ashley. Ashley knows how to help him over it. By the end of chapter 2, Ashley and Sarah can learn about a proper, blow job. Dad can eat Ashley out, who then shows Sarah what is it like in front her father.

The third installment could start from the father's POV as the girls continue to tease him and how temptation is hard to fight. Switching to Sarah's POV you could express her depression that Dad won't love her, and Ashley sexually comforting her. Dad witnesses the anguish and comfort and finally relents.

Now I have also told you what I THINK could happen in the future... what I would LIKE to see in the future is another installment ;) so maybe, you will find time to craft chapter 2 soon.

Thank you.

P.S.

I am thrilled that Game Night continues to be a hit. I feel a little sorry for the brother - I don't know how he could manage to keep up for the long haul. Each installment manages to get me going. I'll think it over and add a comment on it there.

This is a really good story, I would enjoy reading more.

Are you going to leave this here, or continue?

More please!

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Great Story

2 stars because you didn't finish it even though you promised.

Wie geht es weiter