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Thank you for reading this story. I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I would love to hear from any of you regarding this story and what you would like to see in the future. Thank you all.
BenevolentDCC
- COMMENTS
Ardent_Reader2017about 7 years agoYou say the story would continue if feedback supports the need. I see that this is rated 4.50, has several likes, and 26 comments. Now, I didn't read the comments, so, I cannot say how positive they were. But I would like to know what you consider enough feedback to support another installment.
Frankly, I could imagine that the second installment be all about the father struggling with his desires, even being a little hesitant to continue with Ashley. Ashley knows how to help him over it. By the end of chapter 2, Ashley and Sarah can learn about a proper, blow job. Dad can eat Ashley out, who then shows Sarah what is it like in front her father.
The third installment could start from the father's POV as the girls continue to tease him and how temptation is hard to fight. Switching to Sarah's POV you could express her depression that Dad won't love her, and Ashley sexually comforting her. Dad witnesses the anguish and comfort and finally relents.
Now I have also told you what I THINK could happen in the future... what I would LIKE to see in the future is another installment ;) so maybe, you will find time to craft chapter 2 soon.
Thank you.
P.S.
I am thrilled that Game Night continues to be a hit. I feel a little sorry for the brother - I don't know how he could manage to keep up for the long haul. Each installment manages to get me going. I'll think it over and add a comment on it there.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoSo when are you going to finish this wonderful story that you started and then left us hanging???????????????
Anonymousabout 8 years agoVery very HOT and arousing. Great start and Yes we need at least chapter 2 and maybe more if it's anything like the first chapter. Well written and brought the unexpected twist of action with Ashley and next hopefully; his daughter Sara. Hopefully,m Sara will be just as wet and horny as Ashley and quickly wants to screw her Dad really hard. Since both girls seem to share everything; maybe they will after thinking over this experience set up a plan to both screw him at the same time ??? Many possibilities Daddy. Thank you.
