All Comments on 'Geek Girlfriend Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I was really enjoying this, and then the vomiting began. Nope. That needs some kind of additional warning on it.

gentle504gentle504almost 7 years ago
Unique

Nice job! Keep at it, but next time add some warning

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Um, no.

That got really disgusting, really fast. I'm out. Liked the set up, the writing is pretty good, but you definitely need to review what's arousing and what isn't. Getting vomit all over yourself? Isn't.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Excellent

I respectfully disagree. The writing is very good, and the juxtaposition of Macie’s cute tiny girly dick with vomit and other bodily waste was a real turn on for me. Thanks!

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