All Comments on 'Gemini Triad: Prologue'

Great plot, great story, cant wait for more.. but you need to spell Hong Kong with a K... not a C... please.. check spelling before submitting...

Author?s apology: It?s been called to my attention that the third time I mentioned Hong Kong in the prologue, I spelled it Hong ?Cong?. I checked; and, yep, I sure did. Finger and mind's eye errors on my part; I typed it, then missed catching it when I proofread. Sorry. But, shit happens.

Hell yes I rate this story a 5; I wrote it and I know what's coming, so this it a great build up. JL

The only thing a "little different" about this story is the subject matter. Otherwise, it holds to her high standards of character and (I anticipate) high humidity sex. Hey, JordonLynn: You have several balls in the air now (O/D, Gemini and my favorite high-toned slut Diane) - I love watching the balancing act working its way out. In the hands of a master, none will fall (though many may be licked, fondled and squeezed). Good show.