All Comments on 'Gemma's Holiday'

Good story but the ending was telegraphed from the start. Let's get that hotel manager in on the fun in the next chapter. Maybe back home and they could be one happy family.

hot made me hard but should get manager to fuck too and then when they get home include all there other friends and have a orgy and fuck her dad senceless,

5/5 well done

Loved this story. I think it needs a part 2 with the sexy hotel manager.

What happened to chapter 2? Loved chapter 1, but definitely needs another chapter.

The ending is a bit antclamatic though. Declarations about the future of their love and commitment would be more romantic.