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Hoochymama67Hoochymama67over 3 years ago

I hope you add more! What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A perfect first time

Beautiful, and surprisingly so very very erotic for a first time and without the clumsiness that can happen with a peer! A great story that flowed naturally. Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

magentalotusmagentalotusover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the thoughtful and kind words! I certainly did not want to write a novel but a sexy and erotic tale of a girl unleashing her sexuality. I have submitted the next chapter of Gemma and Jason to Literotica, stay tuned!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very good start!

Really looking forward to Ch.02 and beyond. One change I would suggest is, “I was no longer a virgin...and proud of it!”

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Where is Ch. 02?

It is still not published yet? Why? You said it has been submitted, right?

magentalotusmagentalotusover 3 years agoAuthor

After some editing/approval roadblocks, Chapter 2 has been resubmitted to the admins for approval. Thanks for the continued interest! Fingers crossed it gets approved soon. I look forward to feedback from Jason and Gemma's next encounter :) xoxo

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New author of short stories on Lit. Not so new sexual explorer. My goal with my short stories is to provide detailed fantasy sexual trysts but not write novels that take forever to get to the action. I hope you enjoy!

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