All Comments on 'General Gordon'

really liked the humor and the wording was very smooth. Thanks much. There is a boo boo in the continuity though.

First Ginger tells General: "Go right ahead, sweetheart; I like to watch a man pleasuring himself." Then at the end she suddenly says opposite: "We didn't agree on this. You never told me you were going to give yourself a hand job!"

forward, march....keep on writing.

was a long time coming ...