by cookingwithgas
The story made it"bones" with the ending. 4/5... I often wonder if every female cheater is just a self absorbed skunk of some sort or another. They seem to take different paths to cheating, during cheating and after the husband catches them. Why do they bother when they can just walk away with half fuck anyone they want? Also so many of our slut M/C pretend to care what their husband thinks or will do... Also what their friends and family do.... TFS
As they say can't have one without the other good, bad yatta yatta and a blah...
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The “dying friend / relative that sneaks off with / invites the MC’s wife to cheat, then ‘compensates’ hubby with money / land / something” plot has been done and overdone. In kind with most of the previous versions, hubby goes crazy and tears up everything to save the tatters of his “honor”.
By the way, having half your story taken up with a screed against other LW authors doesn’t make your submission any more enjoyable.
All in all, “adventures of the butt-hurt”.
Just wondered why Amber didn't dump all this pain on her at the will reading? Good story and secret slut got her just rewards.