All Comments on 'Generative Change'

Not good.

Sorry you didn't like it.

The return of the king

All premise, no payoff.

Felt more like a worldbuilding exercise than a story with plot and characters.

Also, total downer ending.

Glad you are back, keep em coming. Would have liked if the ending was longer

Started wondering what it'd be like if it was just a ploy to get her and I was not disappointed. If you do have a sequel planned, I look forward to it

@33RPMVinylPants, sorry you didn't like the ending, or the story, but we all have our preferences, perhaps the next one will be more your style.

@anon The ending was the ending, it just finsihed there 🤷

@elendai No sequel planned at this point, but there certainly is room for one if I get time/an idea for one.