by GarnettGibson
I hope for more in the story than Jasmine being a slave who can just be molded. The first 3 part story was more fun because we didn't know what was happening (although it was strongly hinted), but also because it was unclear what was going on with Jasmine being controlled, who else might be involved. I was hoping that Devon would use Jasmine to stealthily control some other people, some of the other women, Tasha or the other rich boring girl in the first story. They all are empty vessels. Devon should control them, Jasmine should have a purpose.