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StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 6 years agoAuthor
Winners

My twist on the story is that she is happy as a genie, with someone who appreciates her and has an interest in helping her be a genie. The husband is happy as he has all the money, and hasn't gone through a messy divorce. The magician is happy because he has a beautiful young woman devoted to his pleasure. Depending on your moral outlook, everyone is a winner.

The woman is to be kept in a fantasy world, is that a bad thing? Lucky her, but then we all live in our own perspective or fantasy view of the world, and life.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
I'm going to be the Grinch

Two Wrongs

make it twice

As Wrong

Timtom12Timtom12over 6 years ago
Loved it

Awesome twist!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
double 5 star !!

🙂

acupacupover 6 years ago
Nice Start

but feels unfinished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 stars

A nice story for Christmas Eve, thank you.

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