All Comments on 'Genie in a Flask'

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PrinceBambiPrinceBambiover 4 years ago

interesting story. loved the bi sex. in stories guys never get to enjoy sex with other guys unless they are full on gay. Why should ladies be the only ones to enjoy sucking cock.

Only comment about the story... needs more sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A small grammar error

Nice story, but saying "I seen" instead of "I saw" makes the genie sound stupid and trashy (no offense) and really takes me out of the story. I recommend changing that in your writing going forward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
great story

awsume story hope to read more about it

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not a genie...

It's actually a jinn or djinn. A regular genie simply follows your commands to the letter. A djinn however twists them in any way possible.

maninconnmaninconnabout 3 years ago
Great tale!

Thanks for writing! I can see this going into subsequent episodes. There’s some magic in those barns!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

42DD? You probably don't realize, given the lack of awareness of this in your stories, but a 42 band size is for going around a very large, fatty, upper torso. it does NOT mean a hot woman with a great rack, it means a morbidly obese woman. PEriod. Even a 38 is a pretty 'curvy' (to put it nicely) woman. a 36 is getting towards dangerous BMI levels, and a 32 would be fairly skinny, regardless of the cup size. You want to describe a busty, but good looking woman? Keep the band size in check a 32D would be stunning, and a bit top-heavy a 34DD, phenomenal, like a lot of famous women in the media, healthy, fit, and great boobs. 42DD? A fucking heifer. Pure and simple.

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...

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