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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Oh damn. I so would love to meet the person the algorithmn would pick for me....

KurtVKurtV11 months ago

This is extraordinarily well written. Love the cliffhanger ending.

202GE202GE9 months ago

Good writing but the story is all head and no heart. It's like they are both using each other and still thinking that is enough.

VallesMarinerisVallesMarineris9 months agoAuthor

@202GE, I'm glad you thought the writing was good. Were you commenting on just the first chapter, or the whole story?

In other chapters you'll see that Smith and Avery share other activities throughout the story besides sex. But note that this is an erotic story on an erotica site, meant for readers who enjoy that genre. So that's the emphasis, not romance.

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Chapter 10 (the conclusion) of "The Secret App" submitted. Thanks for the positive ratings of the previous chapters. More stories on the way. Your comments and critiques are important. Let me know what you think. I like the idea that Mars, the “male” planet, has the largest...

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