All Comments on 'Georgia Plays The Game Ch. 10'

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Karen_48Karen_48almost 4 years ago
Nice job

You did a great job finishing the story and bringing to a close all the loose ends so we weren’t left hanging wondering what happened. You also don’t need to apologize about a long chapter. Your writing always has enough action and character development to make us want to read more so length isn’t never a problem. I also like the way you weave characters from previous stories into the new ones so we feel like we are part of there world.

Siska100Siska100almost 4 years ago

I guess Georgia's story had to end sometime.

But you did manage to tidy up the loose ends and provide an ending that doesn't leave unanswered questions, just as you did before with Jessica.

I can't wait to read about Dee and Hazel.

Cuckoldtobe79Cuckoldtobe79almost 4 years ago
Wow

Again I must say amazing stuff. The natural flow and juicy scenes you provide get the blood flowing and the chest tightening. Thank you. Look forward to more like this in the future😊👍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Kent and Anna

Please one paragraph on Kent and Anna and how their new lifestyle worked out. I love the whole series, please keep going.-

MarsPatrolMarsPatrolover 3 years ago

I loved it! The sex kept getting better as did the plot. Thank you so much for sharing your vision. ❤️🔥

8796Porno8796Pornoover 3 years ago

Thank you for writing this great story. i enjoyed it very much!

cr3mp13cr3mp13over 3 years ago
Amazing

Loved it. The intricate storyline, the great characters, the smszing sex scenes. You really hit the mark!!

Absolutely love those stories about tasks and chsllenges and games and finding your limit.

Favourite parts were the "The Girl in the Hood" scenes. Really well written, just enough details. And I absolutely LOVE those "pregnancy risk game" scenarios. Girls not only not being on the pill but actively stopping it/ being forced/told to. Damn those scenes had me.

Pregnancy risk and pregnancy games do it more for me than pregnancy intent. But everything was just gold.

Hope you have more of that planned and tou explore those alleys more!

Keep in soldiering!

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77over 2 years ago

Thank you Crimfolk. It was a pleasure reading you and some of it bringed back alot of memory for me when I was reading the different chapters. As a Dancer in the past I know how it is important to take care of the Customer but at alot the places I Danced the better you was with the Manager or Owner of the Club the better times you got to Dance. So you showed how some Us Dancers took care of business for the Owners and Managers and some the Security even at the Clubs I Danced.

Thanks and I cant wait read more of you.

H.

ScentAuroraScentAuroraabout 2 years ago

Thanks awesome story.

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle8 months ago

Couldn't stop reading. You sucked me into their journey. I had read Dee's journey and now Georgia's. I hope you continue Charlis journey. Can't stop reading your stories

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I am editing Challenge 5 and will be submitting this week. Work has begun on Challenge 6 so there shouldn't be so long a wait for that one! Thanks for all the support and kind comments

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