All Comments on 'Get All You Can Take'

Story wise this was a great addition to the previous chapter, but in the telling it was almost like a cross between past tense and present tense. It made for somewhat disjointed sentences. Suggest sticking entirely with past tense, the whole story will flow better.

Thanks for more of this cool couple!

Enjoyed it and thanks.

I hated English class, but recognize the foreshadowing of a John and Ann story featuring Ace and Jenny

Great story! It was a story of the TRUE FIRST RESPONDER! Nothing against EMT Police and Firemen Firewmomen we need them but the THE TRUE FIRST RESPONDERS ARE THE GENERAL PUBLIC. I could go on and tell stories of local people who have done so many things and very seldom hear it from the local news.

Very well done. Won one tournament myself back in the olden days before moving to Fairbanks Alaska. First volunteer day I put a hole in my Tournament tee, Dang it. Another 5 BIG SPARKLY STARS!

I wish you could have a time line with all the intertwined stories with Ace, Jenny, Ann, John etc.