All Comments on 'Get Wet, Girls Ch. 02'

I'll be honest: I read this when I woke up this morning, then spent all day wondering how you possibly managed to write a sequel that was better than the first.

You've really honed an artform in your ability to tease the reader to the point where they almost can't take it anymore, but you never push your characters further than they should go. You allow them to do what comes naturally to them; their character development never seems forced- it is incrementally relatable to the reader. If the character wants to give a guy a blowjob, she does. If she doesn't, she doesn't. The reader is never left hanging, thinking, "Dammit, she should have fucked that guy. Why didn't she?!"

A well deserved 5.

Great story! Fingers crossed Claire also soon finds herself in a similar publicly exhibited scenario ;)