All Comments on 'Getting Away from It All Ch. 02'

Wow, hot and sexy tale. Just hope you have lots more to go yet.

Having now read both parts I would like to see this taken a lot further, you have left openings for a long multi part story, please carry on I will look forward to the next part.

Really enjoyed this so far and looking forward to reading more.

Only thing I would mention is the incest discussion, by its timing: I'd have put that in right after he got into bed, then warmed up rather than having him start penetrating her and then talking about it; they could resolve it first, then madly screw like they did, then joke about it when over. I say it because for many it could have killed the sexual mood (although Keith really couldn't have gone anywhere).

Sexy installment nonetheless. I'll be curious to see how you develop it further with the "gold" angle and them staking a claim, what you might add from her heritage, etc. I'll await the next addition.

Loving the story. AAAAAA+++++