by JustJaney
An erotic romance between two old friends, in love for years, but unable to declare their love then. Evidently, Evie was married at that time and Joe was in their own relationship, but it is evident that there was a mutual attraction from the past.
It would be nice a sequel to this story.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
I really enjoy that you and other female writers bring more sensitive and realistic feeling into the bedroom. The usual grunt and grind can be the tedious.
Well told story! I'm a hetero male and I found it well developed, with interesting characters and a totally believable plot line. Having, in the distant past, embarked on a romantic interlude while playing softball, it brought back some good memories. That particular relationship flowered because I hadn't hit on the woman. She kept waiting for it to happen. Frustration can lead to interesting events in interesting places, especially after a hard fought ball game.
While your story stands on it's and own quite well, there are a lot more areas that could be explored. Feels like we are left at the "end of the begining" stage. Please expand on this story more.
Great job in telling this. Both sweet and sexy. Loved the slow build up and the realistic inner-struggles. And yes, you could and SHOULD continue this. :)
Pleasant. Totally predictable. A Harlequin story. A "bodice ripper." Not overly erotic.
as they did in this story. Circumstances and coincidences occurred at the right times for two people to fall in love. Makes for a good story--makes a good story hot.
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Perhaps there's even a hotter sequel?
But this is an Erotic Couplings story not Romance. But with a second chapter it could easily be a Romance...
Just the right amount of anticipation, romance and love making. * * * * *
All of your work is just wonderful. I adore it.
But only an idiot would take joe back. He showed his true colors and they will show up again. only a fool...
Although experienced a nice young love story. Anticipation always makes things better. Keep writing.
Loved the story line, the character development, and the technical skill. Glad I have you in my favorites.