All Comments on 'Getting Back Up on that Horse'

by JustJaney

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auwingerauwingerabout 7 years ago
Loved it!

Great story, and totally believable!

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticabout 7 years ago
A hot romance between two old friends!

An erotic romance between two old friends, in love for years, but unable to declare their love then. Evidently, Evie was married at that time and Joe was in their own relationship, but it is evident that there was a mutual attraction from the past.

It would be nice a sequel to this story.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

OverJackOverJackabout 7 years ago
Sensitivity

I really enjoy that you and other female writers bring more sensitive and realistic feeling into the bedroom. The usual grunt and grind can be the tedious.

jetpacksamjetpacksamabout 7 years ago
And Then What Happened?

More Please.

SisterRobinSisterRobinabout 7 years ago
Very nice...

There are too few sweet stories here.

I loved this one!

B_BaileyB_Baileyabout 7 years ago
Part 2?

Nice romance story. Just finish the damn thing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Even guys can like this story

Well told story! I'm a hetero male and I found it well developed, with interesting characters and a totally believable plot line. Having, in the distant past, embarked on a romantic interlude while playing softball, it brought back some good memories. That particular relationship flowered because I hadn't hit on the woman. She kept waiting for it to happen. Frustration can lead to interesting events in interesting places, especially after a hard fought ball game.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Finish please

While your story stands on it's and own quite well, there are a lot more areas that could be explored. Feels like we are left at the "end of the begining" stage. Please expand on this story more.

SimonOSimonOalmost 7 years ago
Fantastic!

Great job in telling this. Both sweet and sexy. Loved the slow build up and the realistic inner-struggles. And yes, you could and SHOULD continue this. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Pleasant. Totally predictable. A Harlequin story. A "bodice ripper." Not overly erotic.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 6 years ago
Sometimes things just fall in place...

as they did in this story. Circumstances and coincidences occurred at the right times for two people to fall in love. Makes for a good story--makes a good story hot.

Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Perhaps there's even a hotter sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love the story 5 stars

But this is an Erotic Couplings story not Romance. But with a second chapter it could easily be a Romance...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very good

Needs a next chapter

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckabout 5 years ago
Yes, it needs at least another chapter

Probably more than one.

Bebop3Bebop3over 4 years ago
Another Excellent Story

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your work.

WordcraftWordcraftover 4 years ago
NEW FAVORITE AUTHOR!!

Just the right amount of anticipation, romance and love making. * * * * *

SexuallyconfusedpandaSexuallyconfusedpandaabout 4 years ago
Another brilliant one

All of your work is just wonderful. I adore it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very nice

But only an idiot would take joe back. He showed his true colors and they will show up again. only a fool...

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 4 years ago
Nice

Although experienced a nice young love story. Anticipation always makes things better. Keep writing.

Cracker270Cracker2706 months ago

Loved the story line, the character development, and the technical skill. Glad I have you in my favorites.

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Ack! I just confessed to my husband that I've been writing erotic romance for years and publishing on Literotica. I'm not sure what I was worried about...now he's volunteering to help me "research" for my next story. ;-)

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