by Jimvice
The premise was hot but you ended it prematurely before there was any actual sex. Three stars.
I like where this is going. I wish it hadn't so soon. I'd have gladly kept on reading. Can't wait for the next part!
Lindsay and Charlie are normal mother and son until that serendipity moment. Two attractive two following nature. The ending was realistic for a first taboo encounter.?? My mother and I had three similar "touchings" leading up to finally making love.
Gets a little out of control at the end, with him suddenly dominating her, taking pictures(!) out of the blue, and then traipsing off to bed without touching her. Maybe the author is setting up for a Chapter 2, but their fucking after all that buildup was definitely what should have happened right then.
"More to come. It’s not over."
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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.
Good story - I agree she turned submissive too quickly - but overall good flow and build up - I agree DDD was not needed - interested to see where you take it
Would love to read about women with the more common B & C cups (heck, even A would be fun too). She is still of child bearing age, so hopefully there is some direction that way in the next chapter.
I'm hoping you're going to continue this. Maybe add more interaction between them. Some mutual hands on. I'm looking forward to more.
Great story, very sexy plot. Wonderful desription of their activities. Superb series. I hope you choose to expand this story. Thanks for writing these stories.
Good story. But more definitely necessary. This is only an appetiser. So I'm giving you 4. The main course is necessary. And please make it a real jerk-off material.