All Comments on 'Getting Comfortable'

by Jimvice

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf579 months ago

The premise was hot but you ended it prematurely before there was any actual sex. Three stars.

tjreadertjreader9 months ago

I like where this is going. I wish it hadn't so soon. I'd have gladly kept on reading. Can't wait for the next part!

JimviceJimvice9 months agoAuthor

More to come. It’s not over.

AlwaystabooAlwaystaboo9 months ago
Amazing story with perfect progression

Lindsay and Charlie are normal mother and son until that serendipity moment. Two attractive two following nature. The ending was realistic for a first taboo encounter.?? My mother and I had three similar "touchings" leading up to finally making love.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The DDD tits turned me off.

Her nipples would be looking at her knees.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Gets a little out of control at the end, with him suddenly dominating her, taking pictures(!) out of the blue, and then traipsing off to bed without touching her. Maybe the author is setting up for a Chapter 2, but their fucking after all that buildup was definitely what should have happened right then.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Please write the next part soon as I loved it

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Excited for the next part

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

"More to come. It’s not over."

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

Rnlaw44Rnlaw449 months ago

Good story - I agree she turned submissive too quickly - but overall good flow and build up - I agree DDD was not needed - interested to see where you take it

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Would love to read about women with the more common B & C cups (heck, even A would be fun too). She is still of child bearing age, so hopefully there is some direction that way in the next chapter.

stratmanstratman9 months ago

very hot. very descriptive.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Thanks. Good story, let it continue..

Eric_ShiftEric_Shift9 months ago

I'm hoping you're going to continue this. Maybe add more interaction between them. Some mutual hands on. I'm looking forward to more.

live4thebjlive4thebj8 months ago

That was hot but how long do we have to wait for part two? ****

KittyLover80KittyLover808 months ago

Great story, very sexy plot. Wonderful desription of their activities. Superb series. I hope you choose to expand this story. Thanks for writing these stories.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good story. But more definitely necessary. This is only an appetiser. So I'm giving you 4. The main course is necessary. And please make it a real jerk-off material.

unclebeardyunclebeardy7 months ago

4*+ Part 3 He wakes up as she slides into his bed

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