All Comments on 'Getting Even'

What a total jerk

what a change in attitude, and almost overnight. If you think it was her sister with Dave, I don't. Or maybe, they were both at it. So, get out of this comedy of a marriage

tee he

Hope to read more

I guess that's what happens when you assume the worst and think revenge before trust. This guy reminds me of a few other moronic charactors invented by some other authors on this site. You satirized that type of story perfectly. Well done.

...dunce!!!...you didn't catch her 'cause she's 'owned' by blacks...where you'll never know...dumb whitebread!!!

Guessed the twist but liked it anyway.

A very different twist, but I enjoyed it. maybe there will be a follow up?

lol nice, no seriously this would be the perfect plan for catching a cheater.

Sperm dies in minutes once it is

outside in open air, what a moron for

considering such a stunt and you

for writing it.

Don't understand why everyone always jumps all over the author when they add something to their story that doesn't fit real life. Most if not all these stories are fiction( which means they never happen).

so if an author wants to add an improbable incident to his story why can't he. Lighten up folks these stories are for enjoyment only not to teach about real life.

... It made me laugh. To the complainer "Sperm dies in minutes once it is

outside in open air, what a moron for considering such a stunt and you for writing it"; How would that matter? He believes he knocked up his wife with another mans sperm. It's funny! The fact that it wouldn't work is icing on the cake.

Panther Fan.

I have often fantasised about doing this to my wife Nora and getting her pregnant by a seventy year old black man. I would love to stroke her ever swelling belly as his baby grows inside her.

So what is really true? In each cycle there are just a few days that make up the fertile window. Are you that zeroed in on her cycle? Or was it just for the story that She got pregnant?

The story simply leaves too many questions unanswered. What is he going to do about the misunderstanding? Is his wife having an affair, given the three years of unhappy sex over condom issues-just because hubby was wrong about one time, doesn't mean he is altogether wrong over three years. It was a mistake, but an easy one to make.

Is she going to get pregnant by the black man's ejaculate? If not, do they find a way out of their problems?

Too many unresolved issues and unanswered questions...

yes would nice to find she pregnant not know who father is. had a one night stand with a married woman a few years back was great