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- "Really?"
- "Indulge me, Ben. Tell me everything."
- "I might need another drink - or two."
- "I might, too." said Brynn. She flicked her eyelashes, and three waiters trampled over each other to reach our table.
She ordered another martini, and I asked for an imported beer. I settled for a Stiegl.
- "Are you sure that you want to hear all of this?"
Brynn smiled. "Yes, please."
I told it all, from high school to Toronto. I didn't sugar-coat anything. Brynn didn't seem particularly surprised by anything I said.
- "He cheated on me, just so that he could hurt you." she said. "His hate for you was stronger than his supposed love for me - if he ever had any." Brynn sounded like an English major.
I didn't know if Duncan fucking Cockburn was even capable of love. But I didn't know anything about Brynn's relationship with him, so I kept my mouth shut.
She seemed to be watching me, studying my expressions. I'm not sure what she saw.
- "Would you be willing to help me, Ben?" she asked.
- "How could I help?"
- "Well, I had to look at pictures of him fucking your girlfriend. Would you be willing to help me? I want to show him pictures of you and me fucking."
*****
- COMMENTS
oldtwit17 days agoOh the plot is still good, but by writing that ending to this part it's made it much more of a joke read,
Anonymous9 months agoJesus, protect me from convoluted, bloated, pointless plot lines and deliver me a tale worthy of my attention and time. Guide me not into mental whiplash, but shield me from lazy storytelling, from authors who have no direction, bored with their own work. Amen.
Dreamdog519about 1 year agoYou lost me this is so childish. I have loved your other stories but this one went from a great tale to zero in one chapter. I'll find something else to read.
dirtyoldbimanover 1 year agointeresting. seems to show that some young, well to do adults in their 20' are still behaving and creating drama like they were still in high school
Anonymousover 2 years agoWow! Just when I think you are going to make a right turn, you hook a u-turn and then start driving in reverse. I know it makes me sense but you managed to completely throw me with your latest twist. It’s not that it is a bad thing but just so totally unexpected. I have come to the possible conclusion that Millie runs a mental institution and considers the patients to be either friends of hers or dating fodder for people she knows because there seems to be some serious emotional damage or at the very least it is some major baggage these “friends” are toting around. It makes for a very interesting and unusually fun story to read but I would hate to live that life. I have to sadly admit that you have managed to completely entertain me on a seriously warped level which says alot about my state of mind at the moment but I wouldn’t change your story for anything. Thanks again for keeping me thoroughly amused while still being emotionally invested in Bens situations which is a very unusual combination but it is truthful.
J.D.
