All Comments on 'Getting Lucky'

That's what they call love.

Wow, well done. I wold hope the daughter helps out mom and somehow gets some locks on the doors he can't open.

Always nice to read about a love that means more than sex or money. In itself worthy of 'like it'.

The closing wife’s comment says it all. True love is har..

What a sad but pleasant surprise, someone who takes their vows to heart. Well done 5++ stars

Weirdly beautiful little story! Thanks, M&M!

Like it, a lot.

Didn't see that one coming. A truly loving wife.

5***** This was a sad but stunningly well-written story. Write-on!!!

Ok this was just amazingly well done, bravo sir, bravo.

3rd time through for me and I still think this is an amazingly well done story, especially for such a short one. That is truly a loving wife.

I like this story so much! Thank you.

Different. Awesomely different.

...one of the best short stories here on Lit. So complete & so concise. Thanks, m&m.

Keep 'em comin'.

Great story without any doubt.

Have to add. Not noticed this one. OUTSTANDING

LOVE. Slap*hapy*papy. #9

Now THAT's how vows should be honoured!

I enjoyed it. It was my first time reading it and I found this new storyline a refreshing change.

Unfortunately, it appears the daughter has given up on her father.

An honest,loyal woman...as rare as a unicorn!

This story sneaks up on you and smiles wide! -5-

Now there is a loving wife. Love the last line. 5 all day. Definitely a unique story and can't help but smile.

Stunning absolutely stunning story. 5 stars

Well, here's something you don't see every day, an actual loving wife in the Loving Wives category. I know I often wish the readers had some way to vote lower on a story. Today, I want some way to vote higher. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. I'd like to read more of your stories, but for some reason my monitor has gotten all blurry.

I don’t think there are any words in the English language that can convey what a touching story this is. Truly different and wonderful!

Great, but sad story. Thank you

Where does this author get his ideas? The writing is so original and moving. It would be so easy to make him psychologically damaged by her affair and have her repenting her actions, but the author chose to make the explanation more natural and without judgement. It is just one loving wife taking care of her husband. It's beautiful.

Bravo! A moving story about a truly loving wife. It brings tears and smiles both at the same time.

Dammit!! Short but kicked me right in the nads. One of the most intensely moving stories I have ever seen on this site. I am 100% heterosexual, sure do love pussy and consider myself a man. But this one popped the tears right outta me. Absolutely beautiful love story.

Wow, I could not even imagine. 5 Stars for a moving and realistic story! Thank you

I was thinking Gene had Alzheimer's. Interesting pickup line and a very good, heartwarming story.

With my wife

Wonderful story, this is what true love is supposed to look like!

Great little plot line. Nice job on trimming the cliches. 5

Now thats a wife you give EVERYTHING to. God Bless her

Like the 50 first dates movie!!!

One of the best stories out here. Thank you!

Well done.

Loved this really original short story. 5/5

holy shit .

five stars

I mean, an actual loving wife in Loving Wives? Someone take her photo, she's more rare than a Siberian tiger. We should start a petition to have this story cordoned off from all the others, to protect her!

Wow, must be a helluva lot of cliches, to knock a ten page story down to one page once you cull them. But even at one page it’s a pretty damn great story. Thanks, more&.

Heart warming story of true love. Really Nice, thank You 5 stars for writer. Loved it

Someone like that needs to be in a facility. It's sweet but unrealistic.

More than 5/5

A really great woman.

The character Mariela has my undying respect and heartfelt sympathy. What a woman!

This one should be printed and framed. Bravo for even writing this. This is truly how a loving wife (husband) should care for the love of their lives. this should get 10 stars.

Almost forget. F**k that kid. How dare she say anything like that. Ingrate little shit. Throw her out and let her fend for herself.

Don't we all wish, for better or for worse and forsake all others. A lot of people, (more women than men), seem to forget the promise and the vow. There really aren't any do overs if you keep the promise. Good story 5 stars

Rating (5) says it all.

Full marks for originality.

Enjoyable quick read.

You just captured true love!

Outstanding!!!

Can't beat this story possible to match only.

True loving wife who believes in vows. 10 stars should be possible for this great story

Superb. Now if more couples had the same sense of loyalty there would be fewer divorces. Then again the BTB stories would disappear :

What a Woman!🙏👍☝️💕❤️😍😇

Made me think of the cringeworthy comedy 50 First Dates.

My late stepfather wasted away from alzheimers. He used to say he woke up to new world every day. Sad.

Nonsequitour

Shed a few tears for this one, what a wonderful wife.

A beautiful story and amazing woman⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What made this story a 5⭐is the wife. She honors her vows. It is a good story, but the epilogue really makes it a great story.

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Thank-you

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Pasqual

If only everyone was so honorable the world would be a paradise.

Sadly it's not.

I want to marry her sister.

This one is nice, just downright nice. You can't help but have a warm feeling for her and her actions toward the unfortunate husband. But then, maybe he's lucky - getting some strange stuff over and over, possibly a sad reality to most men's dreams! It's a 5-star from me and I will remember this little tale .....

Bittersweet. Awesome story

Great tale

that's love and commitment.

What a sad story full of love.

A true loving wife. And a surprisingly different and welcome change.

Damn, this story brought tears to my eyes. The wife is a saint in this story but sadly she won’t be able to keep that up forever as they get older. Eventually he will have to go into an assisted living home.

5 stars, a fantastic tragedy/romance short story.

true story too

A really different story, good one.

That is a well written good story. Very different. Thanks

What a surprise, and in a really good way. Five stars.

JPB

Lousy subject, but very well written. 4 for the subject, 5 for the writing.

Great story. Couched perfect. God bless this woman.

What a great wife.

Here needs to be hospital admit for serious psychiatric care.

Wow!! Food for thought

My wife is experiencing the joys of Alsheimer and dimensia. There's no humor in this story for us. One day at a time

Great story. After reading about every type of slut/whore I is heartening to read.

A rare five stars from me. Lovely story.

JPB

Wow. Lovely and sad. Well done!

I pray I find a wife like Mariela. Nice to have a story showing there are good loving women out there who'd never betray their husbands--even in such a hard situation. I think she's the type of woman who'd get an in-home care-taker when she become unable to continue, or grew old enough that she couldn't .

What a beautiful and yet tragic story. 5 stars. DMW aka Sumnut

Wow dark and deep. Sad but touching.

I gave you a 5 just for the last two sentences...

There's a special place in Heaven for people like her.

A genuine wife.

very, very sad, Disturbing, but the final paragraph gave it a 5.

Very nice story, m&, very nice and very very sad. Thanks for sharing.

But sad. Good job

Wow!!!!

Interesting, saw a movie like this but different.

Groundhog day with a spin and a twist. Beautifully done. 5 ☆

Lmao the daughter doesn’t give a fuck about her pops. Not surprised nowadays

This site doesn't have enough stories about wives like this one. Max stars!

She is what ever spouse should be, whether wife or husband.

Damn what a sad sad story. Very well written, full of emotion. The wife is one in a billion. A short story that really packs a punch. BardnotBard

Oh that’s good, deep in feelings, simple but could be any one of us reading this.

Sad, but beautiful! 5x5

Describes a great wife -- the daughter (meh).

Five stars. Thanks, MM, great story.

After my 10 th read read still. “WOW