All Comments on 'Getting Rich Ch. 02: When Sister Visits'

5 stars. i hope you continue the story. sexy and fun

I could only give it 4 stars because of the miswording, especially the last page. It was a HOT story, tho.

Write it yourself, then. I said what I intended to say.

Lots of spelling errors and you left out a lot of words in your sentences. If you’re going to continue to write, please get someone to proof read for you.

Don’t be a baby and get upset about being criticized. Take it and make your next story better.. You only get better by knowing and correcting your mistakes.

who has not ready the story.

Dude - if you're going to complain, at least try to have a valid reason for it, instead of just admitting you're a homophobic, blue-nosed twit. If you have something valid to say, have the balls to put a name on it, Mr. "Anonymous".

I liked it a lot. Very nice. I hope there is more.