by largefan
I thought your story was great! It was the humor that really put the story over the top. I think in the same circumstance I would have done the same thing. Again the humor was great!!!
Interesting plot, just enough twists and a bit of drama. Keep them coming. I'm interested in how you're going to handle the daughter finding out about Bill and Mama;)
Really loved it looking forward to more . Now what will Bill do with three women wanting him? keep up the good work.
I usually shy away from multiple chapter stories but after reading your 1st chapter, I couldn't wait for the 2nd.
Great story with just enough background to keep a reader's interest.
I also want to know how your going to explain two teenagers, one of whom is the daughter of the mom and the other the daughter if Gina who just happens to be friends with Nancy. This deserves at least another sequel.
Another very good one, not sure what's going to happen next but i am sure it will be worth it
This part of the story is very humorous. Clever storyline with Nancy and her friend who annoys her by calling her the Ice Queen.
Very well done.
Love the innocence, well thought scenarios. Interesting, sexy, ... a wonderful experience.
Excellent, albeit extended, start and build-up but this ended in a great fashion. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
X-Man