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by MissAlaina
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NightAngelicalmost 13 years agovery good
very good story, but you need an editor darling, someone to proofread your work, but very good, please continue
Anonymousover 12 years agoNice start
Hey, nice work, but I concur with the first commenter: you need some help proofreading. I would like to read more from you soon, however! Keep writing!
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