All Comments on 'GianCarlo Ch. 04'

Gian need to come up with a plan to off his dad so he can claim his girl.

I know you said you were inspired by the Sinclaire Saga by Kalamazoo707 you even snuck Mason in there. I am loving your stories keep em coming.

Please find a way for gian to come back to Delia and for his father to understand she is good for him. Continue writing you are doing a great job.

that was so sad i hate gians father that is seriously messed up what he did gian deserves his happiness why does his dad have to be such a damn monster i hope gian figures out a way to go back to dee.

Glad 2see u ain't 1 of those 1 hit wonders. I'll be on the look out 4new chapters:)love it

That was so sad.I feel bad for Dee.I think Stefano will see reason and help GianCarlo, now that he's found his mate also.Smiling at the Jamie and Mason reference. Good chapter

Why don't Giano and Stefan talk to Mason? I'd be willing to bet that Giano's father would soon be worm food, if he got the right vampires on his side. Harming his son's mate must be some sort of trespass on vampire law.

I hate Gian have to stop seeing her.....and that father...what a prick?....He just can't let his son live his own life. He found his mate....his mate!!!!!

God I wanna cry this is so sad!! His father is a dick! Can't he see Delia is the best thing for Gian?! I hope they can stay together can't wait for the next chapter!

Please hurry with the next chapter! This is getting good!!! :-)

I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

MOORREEE

I'm so in love with this series!!! I was crying when Gian was crying. I always say if you can make me cry and feel the characters emotions im sold lol. You are aamazing writer!! This is of my favorite vampires series next to Kal's series. Keep up the good work!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! ツ

I love this story and the way you tied it into the Sinclaire series; just wonderful.

Anna

Please tell me there will be more! Another chapter or 2....I need a happy ending for these two!!!!

made me wanna cry noooot kool BUT I LOVE IT

Please get an editor, do you even read your own writing?

Ok, it is cool that Gian is not the regular alpha male character, all dominance and arrogance an all. But is is a serious weak move to just let his father decide for his supposed "mate". Isn't it supposed to be such a strong pull that you can't escape it? So now he is just gonna walk away loke that? The way it is describe make it more like just "regular" love, nothing really extraordinary. I like Denise, and her attitude about sex/virginity (like it is not who she is, that should not be essentialized), also I guess that as Delia, she may have been abused when she was a child, which could explain the stuff they talked about.

I had a feeling it was sounding a little too "regular". You must understand though, Gian can only fathom the power his father has behind him and his first instincts is to take Dee and run but his love for her can not allow him to hurt her in anyway, including taking her from everything she loves and putting her in very real danger that he can't full protect her from. Keep on reading and you'll see how strong the bond between mates truly is.

oohhhhh shit im crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!