All Comments on 'Gifted Wrapped'

Liked the story, but I felt it needed a bit more substance and background to truly make it a romance. Keep it up.

i love it. it the way you talk that does more than what not said.

your a real great writer, andi should know i both write and read a lot. i love the flow of your words . as i say it not what you write it what you dont but leave it widfe open got my cock hard . don't stop now your on a roll more please more gifted wrapped . i could think of more to put in here and so can you., your holding back im sure love both the writing and that story.,