All Comments on 'Gillian's Descent Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
great story development

I think this is a brilliant erotic plot. You can't help feeling sorry for Gillian even as your dick grows harder. Fantasmic effort!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
great

Keep it going

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 18 years ago
good story

good build up well written story, Shows what will happen if you go down the wrong path.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great

I enjoy the Gillian series and hope you continue it for a while. As her career as in law enforcement is over what will her new carrer be? Shes smart enough to get out of the slammer but where will she land and how low will she go? A pissmopper maybe.. hahaha.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
worth the wait

it just gets better and better and more erotic every time ifeel a bit sorry for her but what the hell

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great

Funny how she hated having to do act like such a slut at first, and now she's haggling over the price of a blowjob. I guess it just goes to show that deep down any girl can become a slut. :D I would have liked it if the prostitutes could have ganged up on her and she hadn't gotten away, but that's okay.

-- Maria

Andromeda7Andromeda7about 13 years ago

Things seem to be working out fine ! !

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