by maxbaumann
Terrific story wonderful pacing. Love the settings, would have been enhanced by peppering it with a few sentences in the languages discussed, sort of like what Tolstoy does in War and Peace, where suddenly prince andrei starts speaking in french. But hey, you are the writer and thanks for what you had done. Can't wait for the next episode
This is a really great story. Looking forward to the next parts. Your great description of the scene with the professeuse in ch. 01 reminded me of my own time spent as a student in France, coming from Germany, grappling with the grading system ("20 ist für den Papst, 19 für den Präsidenten...").
Loved the rai-soaked t-shirt in the first chapter, practically see through for Giovanni's sexy chest, then the evil -- his hairy chest and manly body. How nice to lay his head against Gio's very sexy chest, and suck the cock of a sleeping Giovanni. These two belong together to explore their growing love. Great reading!
You write so beautifully. Is there a continuation to the story? Weill there be a ontinuation?