by Ana_Lingus
You have created an interesting situation for your characters to operate in.
Women are whores. Period.
They can also outdo men in the cruelty department.
Love it when the idealized girl goes and cheats on her beta boyfriend.
Perhaps it would be better with her point of view sometimes, to get to know her thoughts and feelings and experience better how she let herself go and ejoy the feeling of adulterous sex!
Great start but please include physical description of Sam (hair color, body type, etc). Excited to see where this goes!
This is so promising! Hoping for a continuation, unless this was a single installment.
Good job!